falling into the chasm, of timeless doubt. i feel my body strobe to life, as i see you before me. wide eyed friend or lover. one becomes the other. my heart's rythmn moving and matching yours before me. my hands grasp your gift, lifting me, raising me from hiding, and to the fresh air of morning days. the lights blinding burning. i have to let go, i have to trust, i have to take it all, and hope you'll catch me. muscle and bone burning away, tearing away, it's the only way. the shadow covers me, saves me, don't let me drag you down. don't let me slip away. don't let me... just don't let me.... |
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my only suggestion would be to put this poem into more line form...where ever you have punctuation, you might want to break it into seperate lines or something, so that it is easier for the reader to follow...the flow will be a little smoother too
nice first submission
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